Which story is this?

Some of you asked for a description or something to show the difference between this story and other stories... because it's becoming very hard to remember....

This story is about NOUF, ALI, FAHAD, RAWAN, and SAAD....

It's the story that uses N, A, F

---Nouf and Fahad have been the closest friends since they were kids
*b/c their parents were close

--Ali's Austin Martin






Monday, June 8, 2009

part 43--finale ;)

Hey everyone, this is the end of Let's Keep This Just Between Us, Okay.... hope you enjoyed it and enjoy the ending... I love you all ;***
--Hi, My Name Is...
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Rawan


"Hala" I replied silently. I could feel the burn rush through my back and Sa3ad squeezing my hand.

He looks incredible, after all this time he still looks as sexy as hell and that's part of his charm; I'm still scared of him but he still looks good.

I hope he doesn't trick other girls like how he tricked me. He made it hard for me to let other people in. He made it hard for me to trust Sa3ad.

"3adi akalmich digeega?" He asked, never removing his eyes from me.

I looked at Sa3ad, I was so scared but I wanted to get this over with. Sa3ad squeezed my hand then let go.

I followed 3abdullah outside the ba8allah, "Sh9ayer?" I asked.

"Yi3arif?" He asked me as he glanced towards the ba8allah.

"La2." I replied looking down at my arms. Its been four years but at this moment, being with him the wounds felt so fresh, the hurt all came back, I was in that dark place again that I left a long time ago.

"Bas yi3arif ina fee shay?" He asked me and I nodded silently.

"Rawan, ana asif 7ag kil ilee sawait feech." I looked at him, he looked like the 3abdullah I knew in the beginning of our relationship... not the 3abdulah i discovered after, not the 3abdullah that abused me. I'm not falling for his tricks any longer.

I'm stronger now.

"roo7 moot." i muttered.

"na3am?" I felt his hand on my arm, I shuddered and quickly moved my arm away. He reached out for it again and brought it to his face. He looked at the scars that were there because of him. My heart was beating a thousand miles per minute, I was back in that place, scared to death.

I loosened my arm from his grip, "latjessnii!!" I snarled.

"Rawan, gam atasiflich.... sa3ad may3arif..... tabeen it9ar5een weeyee wi3arif shino 9ar gabil?" He said with a scary smile.

"Let's keep this just between us, okay?!" I snarled at him again and ran back to Sa3ad realizing my past will never be in the past.

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three weeks later

Nouf

Rawan is finally getting better. I'm the only other person that knows about the abuse. Those four years were really tough on her oo seeing Abdullah again is really hard. I'm so proud for how strong she is. She's much much better this week.

"Nouf?"

"Ali?!" I asked as I ran to him and gave him a hug, "sh9aar?!"

"Its set!"

"I7lif!!! 5ala9?! 3indina taree5... 3indina mukan?!"

"Eee.. May 17" he said as he smiled.

"Ahhh!!!!! Aliii.. ma agdar an6ir! We're getting married!" MAY 17!!! MAY 17!!! MAY 17!!! that's all I could think about


I wrapped my arms around him and kissed my handsome fiance.

"Let's keep these kisses just between us, okay?" He said as he laughed, his lips next to mine. His laughter echoed throughout the room, "I don't want Rawan to know everything."

Too late. I thought as I smiled.

He saw my evil expression and laughed again.

"May9eer yibga shay minich BAS 7agii?"

"Hehehe.... galbi kila" I responded cheesily..what can I do? I'm so in love.

"That, is enough for me." He replied in his sexy deep voice and kissed me again.

"Yallah jahiz? Lazim insa3id Fahood...." I asked when we came up for air.

"Ee yallah."
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Fahad

*txt recieved from Nouf*:
yallah I'm here.


I'm so nervous... I hope she likes this...

I love her.
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Ali

Hehehe, I smiled to myself.... kilish matwa8a3t ina we'd end up kilina chithii.... Sa3ad oo Rawan; Ana oo Nouf; oo Fahad oo Shoug.

Lail7een ma a9adig ina Nouf, the beautiful lady sitting right next to me in my Aston Martin, nagatnii... oo mitakid ina kil 7ayati a7is ine ma astahilha.

"7adi mistansa 7ag Fahad." Galatli oo i7na na6reen bara bait Shoug.

6ala3tha, ma gidart asheel i3yoona 3anha..... she's beautiful... oo galbha 6ayib... oo she's so selfless... I am in love with her.

Chafatni with her beautiful brown eyes oo 7marat, "Ali! hehe.... bas la6ali3een chithii."

I placed my fingers on her chin and brought her face closer and closer, "intay il7een 7alali.... latgooleenlii may9eer a6ali3 hal jamal kithir ma abi."

7marat mara thanya oo hal mara akthar.. ityanin.

*beep beep*
*txt msg min Fahad*
Yallah jahzeen? Dishaw

"Jahza?" Si2alt Nouf

"Eee... Yallah."
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Shoug

Something fishy is going on....

Fahad, Ali, Nouf, oo Rawan shkither yitsaserooon.... madri laish, maybe b/c i'm new in their group aw shay bas matwa8a3.... ya3ni kilihum 7ababeen they're all so adorable in their own way...

oo things between me and Fahad are going great... ya3ni 9ij 9ij mirta7a ma3a 3ogob ma 3arafnii 3ala il jama3a oo ga3adt ma3ahum oo chift ina 9ij yi7bni kither ma a7iba....


bas madri laish this past week 3indihum shay 9ayer... oo kil ma as2al yisawoon ru7hum baree2een.....

*ding dong* jaras il bait.... as usual, i'm not expecting anyone.... yimkin Fhaid nafs a5er mara I think to myself and laugh as I open the door.

But all I see is a big arrow on the ground and another one after it. The third one says "follow me" and so I lock the door behind me and follow it like an idiot.

Il shari3 9a5a... maku a7ad 6ali3 hal wagt which was kind of freaky bas exciting.... i followed the arrows oo they led to Ali's Aston Martin that girls go crazy over bas there was noone behind the wheels.

So I called Nouf. It rang but she didn't answer.

So I called Ali which I rarely do, "Hallah Shoug." He greeted me.

"3ali, sayartik jidam baitna.."

He laughed and ended the conversation which left me in total confusion.

I heard the laugh again and made sure that the converation ended, which it did.

"hehe, ana ihnii..." He came from behind me, his keys in his hands, "yallah ta3alay....!"

"laiiish? wain ray7een? oo tara iti9alt 3ala Nouf ma jawibat..."

"Eee... it's a surprise" he winked. He has the same handsome features as Fahad. He's really goodlooking.

At that moment my phone rang, it was Nouf, "Halah Nouf, what's going on?"

"Hehehehehehe..." she giggled chinha yahil, "it's a surprise... go with ali.....! trust me, don't worry he's not going to kill u or anything...." she babbled on, "i know it seems scary ina quiet street oo 3ali yaylich min out of nowhere, but its ok... trust me..."

Phew, "ok yallah kanii ray7a" I replied oo got into the car with Ali.

He turned the radio off, so we can talk I guess.

"wain ray7een?"

"nishrab gahwa.."

"heheh! kil hatha 3ashan nishrab gahwa?"

he smiled at that, a knowing smile and looked at me, "itchoofeen"

I looked at him the whole way and he noticed, "you're making me nervous." galii which made me laugh.

"bas kint afakir..."

"3an shino?"

"inta oo nouf."

He smiled when I said her name.

"5ala9 3araft." I said and smiled to myself. I love the look people get when you mention the name of someone the love unconditionally and completely.

He looked at me confused but kept on driving and we just talked about random things until we got to Caribou Cafe.

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Nouf

Umbay ana oo Rawan are so giddy! we can't stop laughing and giggling oo F byi'6ba7na because of that.

"BAS!!!! we have to finish! they'll be back soon!!" zafna.

"Min wain yibt il mufta7?" si2lita Rawan.

"Chift wain 7a6ita..."

"Shda3wa matgoolina.." I huffed sarcastically.

"A5af itboogoonha... it's only for family." He said proudly.

"la tistanis oo it3eesh il door min il7een she still didn't say yes." Rawan commented which made me and her laugh again.

"Chub." F murmured.

"Oh... ya nas... shh!!! come here!!! to this spot!!" Rawan exclaimed excitedly so we went over to see what's going on.

"Shino Rawan?" F asked impatiently.

"Look around F & N.... WE'RE DONE."

We all stayed silent and took it all in.

It looked STUNNING.... so romantic and so perfect...

5osh fikra ina we steal the key oo injahiz il mukan 3ala ma 3ali yidoor feeha, I thought.

"You're so romantic Fahad, this was a great idea!!" I said as I hugged him.

He was smiling. He was in love and happy. He was smiling. We smiled because of how happy he looked.

"Thank you." He said, "Yallah, go go go!" He exclaimed as his phone rang...

"AND QUE!" I screamed oo ana oo R 6al3een.

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Shoug

I entered the house with Ali fussing next to me... I seriously don't get what's going on... they're acting as if they planned a surprise birthday party bas my birthday isn't for a few months.

"Okay yallah ana rayi7.... have fun..." Sa3ad said oo ohwa mishta6.

"Okaaayyy.." I was so confused, "thanks?"

"Anytime." He winked and rushed to his car.

I opened the door and as I walked inside I bumped into something, actually a lot of somethings... heart shaped pink and red ballons were put all over.... and as I passed those I noticed the ground was lit up as a heart.

Candles were placed around the floor in the shape of a huge art.

In the middle of it he stood with a box in his hand.

Tears started forming in my eyes as I got closer to him.

When I got to the center of the heart and stood next to him, he knelt on one knee which made the tears come out more and more.

"Shouga, hatha 9ij chicken nugget style bas amoot 3alaich oo kint baraweech ishkithir..... Shoug , I LOVE you. Intay 7ayatii il7een.... Will you marry me?"

I trembled and fell to the floor, tears gushing out of my eyes.

All I could say were these six words:

"Yes, Fahad, I love you too."







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Thank you readers ;*
hope you liked the story ;**

Comment! :)

love you all,

--Hi, My Name Is...


37 comments:

  1. OMG OMG IT WAS AN AMAZING ENDING O AMAZING STORY.. i loveeeed the story the whole story KILSHAY FEEE.. <3333 love u tooo daaaahling.. bas u have to start up a new on to run alongside Love Drops.. cuz mashalla ur sooo talented.. thanx 4 the story again it was AMAZZZZZING. ::hug::

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  2. thank youuu SO SO SO much! :D
    hehehe thank youuuuu ;* it loves u back!
    ur the first on the last post ;)
    affa 3alaich... i will ;)
    i have an idea right now bas i have to develop it more bas i shall continue inshallah :D

    thank you so much
    wallah u lifted me up :D

    thankssss!!

    HUGE HUG ;**

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  3. umm.... :S *confused*
    lol
    what does that mean?

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  4. abaaaaaaaaaaaai.. zooooooooooooo8aaa!!! abaaai 7adhom they are cute!!

    wansa everything went well at the end!! i never thought Fahad is that romantic 7ada zoo8a!

    -J ;*

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  5. heheeheh eeeeee :D

    hehehe... ee I didn't want it to be a bad ending :)

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  6. Awwwww;** it was an amazing!!

    Loved your story;p

    -N;*

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  7. It was amazing**

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  8. I loved your story from beginning to end, I enjoyed every post to bits. You are an amazing writer, I'm working on my own story as well though I haven't posted and I'd love it if you could help me out with it.
    I hope you'll keep writing because you will be missed and I'm waiting for an update on your other story :*
    You are amazing :)
    xoxo

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  9. wed-locked : thank youuu ;***

    N : thank youuu!! really glad u liked it :D

    Starlight<3: Oh my God... you should see me right now, I have this HUGE smile on my face
    thankk youuu xoxox ;**

    and I'd LOOOVE to help!!
    can't wait for ur story to begin!

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  10. Haha, awh. I'm glad I was able to make you smile, after all it is my job. I've taken the role of wonder-woman, saving lives everyday! :P

    Yes, I am feeling a bit weird today (A)

    and I should post soon, probably tomorrow or the day after (:

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  11. amazing !!!!!!!!!!!
    you go girl !!!!!!!!

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  12. Laiiiiiiiiish MAY 17TH?!?! LAISH!


    Ma tadreen it's my date hehehehehe it's my shisma important date hehe :P

    BS I felt this part went by too quickly it was lovely bs needed more :P

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  13. http://he-holds-the-key.blogspot.com/

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  14. Starlight<3: heheheh! :)
    it's okay, we all have our days:P
    trust me i have it more than others lol;p
    yayyyy :D :D

    CuteandCuddly: THANK YOUU ;* :D

    Jacqui: LOOOl!! :P sorry, that's the date.. you're all invited:P
    aw i'm sorry... i wanted to make it feel like a rush....
    i won't promise anything bas if i think of something good, there will be an epilogue
    IF ;)

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  15. Hmmm bs why that date hehe is it a special meaning to you? :P

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  16. This was an amaaaaaazing endingggg <3
    Loved the story soo much

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  17. loved the story bes i think i missed a part la2ana i dont recall anything about rawan being abused by abdulla willa was the only thing 3an this topic included foog.. madre its kind of confusig .. sh9aar ??

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  18. Jacqui: hehe ummm (A)(A)(A)

    S.W: thank youuu :D

    Anon: hehe, yeah... this is the only part... because i fast forwarded through uni to show what'll happen after

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  19. Hehehehe it means the same to me and well so does the name :P I'll leave you to figure out what name hehe :P

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  20. okaaaaaaaaaaaaay i have to tell u that ur such a great writter tara i read the whole story today ow i was laughing and crying and say awwww all the time wayed wayed wayed wayed 7ilwa elqe9a ow the characters iyaninoooooooooon.....you have to write a new story soon mashallah ur such an amazing writer...allah iwafgich and btw im ur lastest follower

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  21. wooooooooooooooooow its an amazing story thanx 4 writing it for us ;**

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  22. Heey darling
    what a great story that was i lvoed it
    and your a great writer
    salaamz
    from ur sis
    naz@ somalianarab.blogspot.com

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  24. whyyyyy:(. I wanted F and N to end up together. y9l7oon 7gg b3'9. for real.

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